We take for granted,

the beat of our heart, in-breaths

and out-breaths until

we’re challenged and gratitude

for those life rhythms flows forth.


2 comments on “Until

  1. I think your poem is at the heart of ‘gratitude’. We are blessed just to be alive.

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  2. DiosRaw says:


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