Bird’s Eye View

by Joan

Rising sun filters

through new green leaves, igniting

cherry trees beyond.

A line of crows sits across

the road cawing harsh critiques.

                                                                                                         JDG

4 comments on “Bird’s Eye View”

  1. LuAnne Holder says:
    March 30, 2016 at 11:56 am

    I agree. Those last two lines seem to ignite the beauty of the first three. Well crafted, well crafted!

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  2. redgladiola says:
    March 30, 2016 at 1:17 am

    Unexpected twist at the end! He doth protest too much. =)

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