Bird’s Eye View

Rising sun filters

through new green leaves, igniting

cherry trees beyond.

A line of crows sits across

the road cawing harsh critiques.

                                                                                                         JDG

4 comments on “Bird’s Eye View

  1. I agree. Those last two lines seem to ignite the beauty of the first three. Well crafted, well crafted!

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  2. redgladiola says:

    Unexpected twist at the end! He doth protest too much. =)

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