Telling Differences

I sit down to write.

 In the cloudy sky above,

a bird in flight sings.


I sit down to write.

In the cloudy sky above,

a soaring bird sings.


3 comments on “Telling Differences

  1. Thank you, Joan, for inspiring me to write more than 50 years ago, And continuing to do so. I got word a NZ. Blogger/writer reblogged a short story of mine in his creative writing course. Big smile!

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