Tanka Reflections

was it a relay

race they were practicing for –

an elemental 

game – where first rain and then sun

took the field and ran

~~~

                ~~~

watching wind ripple

through low-growing fields of green

loosens something tight

in me, helps me slip care’s knot

and, for a moment, soar free

                                                                                              JDG

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2 comments on “Tanka Reflections

  1. Glenda's avatar Glenda says:

    Just lovely

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  2. Mike's avatar Mike says:

    One amuses, one alfrescos – both delight. Very well executed work.

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