Calling All Readers/ Writers

Today, as we were driving to school, two of my granddaughters and I began composing a joint poem. I began with the first line, ” May each of us remove one stone,” and then the wrangling about what should follow began. Sami, who was serving as transcriber, finally became exasperated and wrote:

Every five seconds an editation

is leading me to great frustration.

I hope this will finally come to an end

and I can soon put down my pen.

We decided to invite you, the reader, to weigh in with your suggested follow-up to “May each of us remove one stone…”  and see where that will take us. We’re looking forward to hearing from you.

                                                                                                                JDG

6 comments on “Calling All Readers/ Writers

  1. Joy Celeste Crawford's avatar Joy Celeste Crawford says:

    May each of us take one stone that is not love
    Until love alone remains

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  2. Joan's avatar Joan says:

    We (the girls and I) loved these suggestions for their depth, cleverness, and variety. Thank you.

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  3. Dabney's avatar Dabney says:

    May each of us remove one stone
    From the pile we keep for casting.
    And feel how it could break a bone
    And how the hurt would last.
    And turning, see it is our own
    To do with as we will.
    And put it in a safer place.
    Peace, be still.

    Thank you all for the invitation.

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  4. Junie B's avatar Junie B says:

    May each of us remove one stone, said Joan
    And finally put down our damn smart phone.
    To look around, breathe deeply and appreciate,
    What God has given us in this imperfect landscape.
    In the midst of our hectic and days filled with flurry,
    We stop, take a breath, and slow down our hurry,
    To love and risk being present in this day
    So our hearts will be able to come out and play.

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  5. Shell's avatar Shell says:

    May each of us
    remove one stone

    To sense its texture
    with listening finger tips

    May each of us
    remove one stone

    and know the message
    that mute stone speaks.

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  6. Cheryl Yarek's avatar Cheryl Yarek says:

    Joan: I love this beginning, it is very inspirational!

    May each of us remove one stone
    from the enemy’s hand,
    from the angry one’s heart;
    from the shoe of a walking friend or foe.

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